What do you think of this poem i wrote when i was 11?

That poem is a prizewinner! If you really wrote when you were 11, I'd sure like to see what you write now. By the way, how old are you now? You have an amazing talent. It's hard to believe you were only 11 when you wrote this, but whatever age you were, it's awesome! You must have been a child prodigy! Most 11-year-olds do not have that advanced vocabulary, or the ability to put thoughts into words like that. I'm impressed!