What do you think of this poetic preface/intro for my story?

Well you start off as the people of this village, but later change, and we...perhaps you should start off as we Her people of this village...or something in that manner to keep it in the same point of view you know. I think it flows nicely, it sounds more of a prophecy or legend, but it has that poetic feel to it. It makes me think that, winter is upon the village and that they are dealing, idk...im kinda bad at advice. Hope i helped tho.